review project_management.md

doc.zih.tu-dresden.de/docs/application/project_management.md

-# User Management for project leaders
+# User Management for Project Leaders
 
 The HPC project leader (PI/PC) has overall responsibility for the project and for all activities within the
 corresponding project on ZIH systems. In particular the project leader shall:
@@ -11,10 +11,11 @@ corresponding project on ZIH systems. In particular the project leader shall:
 The project leader can appoint a *project administrator* with an HPC account to manage these
 technical details.
 
-The front-end to the HPC project database enables the project leader and the project administrator
+The [project management webpage](#access) enables the project leader and the project administrator
 to
 
-* [add and remove users from the project](#access)
+* get a [project overview](#projects)
+* [add and remove users from the project](/#manage-project-members-dis-enable)
 * [define a technical administrator](#manage-project-members-dis-enable)
 * [view statistics (resource consumption)](#statistic)
 * file a new HPC proposal,
@@ -26,8 +27,8 @@ to
 The project leaders of an ongoing project and their accredited admins
 are allowed to login to the system. In general each of these persons
 should possess a ZIH login at the Technical University of Dresden, with
-which it is possible to log on the homepage. In some cases, it may
-happen that a project leader of a foreign organization do not have a ZIH
+which it is possible to log in to the webpage. In some cases, it may
+happen that a project leader of a foreign organization does not have a ZIH
 login. For this purpose, it is possible to set a local password:
 "[Missing Password](https://hpcprojekte.zih.tu-dresden.de/managers/members/missingPassword)".
 
@@ -35,8 +36,8 @@ login. For this purpose, it is possible to set a local password:
 {: align="center"}
 
 On the 'Missing Password' page, it is possible to reset the passwords of a 'non-ZIH-login'. For this
-you write your login, which usually corresponds to your email address, in the field and click on
-'reset. Within 10 minutes the system sends a signed e-mail from <hpcprojekte@zih.tu-dresden.de> to
+you write your login, which usually corresponds to your email address, in the 'Login' field and click on
+'reset'. Within 10 minutes the system sends a signed e-mail from <hpcprojekte@zih.tu-dresden.de> to
 the registered e-mail address. this e-mail contains a link to reset the password.
 
 ![Password Reset](misc/password.png "Password Reset")
@@ -44,11 +45,11 @@ the registered e-mail address. this e-mail contains a link to reset the password
 
 ## Projects
 
-After login you reach an overview that displays all available projects. In each of these projects
-are listed, you are either project leader or an assigned project administrator. From this list, you
-have the option to view the details of a project or make a following project request. The latter is
-only possible if a project has been approved and is active or was. In the upper right area you will
-find a red button to log out from the system.
+After login you reach an overview that displays all available projects. In each of these listed
+projects, you are either project leader or an assigned project administrator. From this list, you
+have the option to view the details of a project or make a follow-up application (extension). The
+latter is only possible if a project has been approved and is active or was. In the upper right
+area you will find a red button to log out from the system.
 
 ![Project Overview](misc/overview.png "Project Overview")
 {: align="center"}
@@ -73,15 +74,15 @@ an employee is marked in red, this can have several causes:
 
 You can specify a user as an administrator. This user can then access the project management system.
 Next, you can disable individual project members. This disabling is only a "request of disabling"
-and has a time delay of 5 minutes. An user can add or reactivate itself, with its ZIH-login, to a
-project via the link on the end of the page. To prevent misuse this link is valid for 2 weeks and
+and has a time delay of 5 minutes. A user can add or reactivate itself within a specific project by
+clicking the link on the end of the page. To prevent misuse this link is valid for 2 weeks and
 will then be renewed automatically.
 
 ![Project Members](misc/members.png "Project Members")
 {: align="center"}
 
-The link leads to a page where you can sign in to a project by accepting the term of use. You need
-also an valid ZIH-Login. After this step it can take 1-1,5 h to transfer the login to all cluster
+The link leads to a page where you can sign in to a project by accepting the terms of use. You also
+need a valid ZIH-Login. After this step it can take 1-1.5 h to transfer the login to all cluster
 nodes.
 
 ![Add Member](misc/add_member.png "Add Member")
@@ -89,9 +90,9 @@ nodes.
 
 ### Statistic
 
-The statistic is located under the tab 'Statistic' in the project details. The data will updated
-once a day an shows used CPU-time and used disk space of an project. Following projects shows also
-the data of the predecessor.
+The statistic is located under the tab 'Statistic' in the project details. The data will be updated
+once a day and shows used CPU-time and used disk space of a project. Follow-up projects also show
+the data of their predecessor(s).
 
 ![Project Statistic](misc/stats.png "Project Statistic")
 {: align="center"}