From d7e6adc1f70357987435cc5a250284fbc455dd3c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: lazariv <taras.lazariv@tu-dresden.de>
Date: Wed, 15 Jun 2022 08:19:27 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Major text improvements

---
 .../docs/access/ssh_putty.md                  | 35 ++++++++-----------
 1 file changed, 15 insertions(+), 20 deletions(-)

diff --git a/doc.zih.tu-dresden.de/docs/access/ssh_putty.md b/doc.zih.tu-dresden.de/docs/access/ssh_putty.md
index 0cc083d67..2de5057d6 100644
--- a/doc.zih.tu-dresden.de/docs/access/ssh_putty.md
+++ b/doc.zih.tu-dresden.de/docs/access/ssh_putty.md
@@ -24,21 +24,16 @@ instructions for installation.
 
 1.  After entering your ZIH login and password you will be logged in to one of the login nodes.
 
-## Configured start a new SSH session
+## Connection Configuration (optional)
 
-You can preconfigure some values. It will save your time during your connections in the future.
+You can pre-configure some connection details additionally. It will save time in the future.
 
-1. Define the connection target. To do so, start PuTTY, define the hostname (taurus.hrsk.tu-dresden.de) and the port (22).
+-   Set your user name. For that choose the tab "Connection" &#8594; "Data" in the navigation tree
+    on the left. Insert your ZIH username in the text field "Auto-login username".
 
-![Settings for SSH connection in PuTTY](misc/putty2_quickstart.png)
+    ![Auto-login username in PuTTY](misc/putty4_username.png)
 
-2. Set your user name. For that choose the tab "Connection" &#8594; "Data" in the navigation tree on the left.
-Insert your user name into the text field "Auto-login username".
-The application will basically perform the same action as the command `ssh marie@taurus.hrsk.tudresden.de:22` in Terminal.
-
-![Auto-login username in PuTTY](misc/putty4_username.png)
-
-3. Set a SSH-key (optional and recommended for security reason).
+-   Set a SSH-key (recommended for security reason).
 
     **Note**: For being able to use a SSH key to login to HPC, you have to register the key on the
     system before!
@@ -55,14 +50,16 @@ The application will basically perform the same action as the command `ssh marie
     Insert the path to your local key-file or brows it using the button "Browse...".
     This will do the same as the command `ssh -i .ssh/id_red25519 marie@taurus.hrsk.tudresden.de:22` in Terminal.
 
-![SSH-key in PuTTY](misc/putty5_key.png)
+    ![SSH-key in PuTTY](misc/putty5_key.png)
 
-4. Enable X-forwarding (optional). To do so, navigate to "Connection" &#8594; "SSH" &#8594; "X11" in the tree left. Put the tick in the checkbox for "Enable X11 forwarding".
+-   Enable X-forwarding. Navigate to "Connection" &#8594; "SSH" &#8594; "X11" in the tree on the
+    left. Select the checkbox "Enable X11 forwarding".
 
-![X-forwarding in PuTTY](misc/putty6_x11.png)
+    ![X-forwarding in PuTTY](misc/putty6_x11.png)
 
-1. Save your configurations. Go back to the "Session" in the tree left. Insert a name into the text field "Saved Sessions" and click
-the button "Save". Afterwards you will see the name in the list below.
+After editing the connection details save your configuration. Go back to the "Session" in the tree
+left. Insert a session bookmark name into the text field "Saved Sessions" and click the button
+"Save". Afterwards you will see the name in the list below.
 
 ![Saving settings in PuTTY](misc/putty7_save.png)
 
@@ -72,7 +69,5 @@ You can change your saved configuration by selecting its name in the list and cl
 "Load". Make your changes and save it again under the same name. This will overwrite the old
 configuration permanently.
 
-You can delete a saved configurations by clicking the button "Delete". This will remove the
-configured session permanently.
-
-**Enjoy!**
+You can delete saved configuration by clicking the button "Delete". This will remove the
+configured session permanently.
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