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 # Request for Resources
 
-Important note: ZIH systems are based on the Linux system. Thus for the effective work, you should
-have to know how to work with Linux based systems and Linux Shell. Beginners can find a lot of
-different tutorials on the internet, for example.
+Important note: ZIH systems run Linux. Thus for effective work, you should know your way around Linux based systems and the Bash Shell. Beginners can find a lot of tutorials on the internet.
 
 ## Determine the Required CPU and GPU Hours
 
-ZIH systems are focused on data-intensive computing. The cluster is oriented on the work with the
-high parallel code. Please keep it in mind for the transfer sequential code from a local machine.
-So far you will have execution time for the sequential program it is reasonable to use
-[Amdahl's law][1] to roughly predict execution time in parallel. Think in advance about the
-parallelization strategy for your project.
+ZIH systems are focused on data-intensive computing. They are meant to be used for highly parallelized code. Please take that into account when transferring sequential code from a local machine. To estimate your execution time when executing your previously sequential program parallely, you can use [Amdahl's law][1]. Think in advance about the parallelization strategy for your project.
 
 ## Available Software
 
-The good practice for the HPC clusters is to use software and packages where parallelization is
-possible. The open-source software is more preferable than proprietary. However, the majority of
-popular programming languages, scientific applications, software, packages available or could be
-installed on the HPC cluster in different ways. First of all, check the [Software module list][2].
-There are [two different software environments](../software/modules.md): `scs5` (the regular one)
-and `ml` (environment for the Machine Learning partition). Keep in mind that ZIH systems have a
-Linux based operating system.
+It is good practice for working on HPC clusters to use software and packages with parallelization wherever possible. Open-source software is more preferable than proprietary software. You can check for already installed software at the [Software module list][2]. However, the majority of popular programming languages, scientific applications, software and packages can be installed on the HPC cluster using different dependencies. There are [two different software environments](../software/modules.md) implementing these varying dependencies: `scs5` (the regular one) and `ml` (environment for the Machine Learning partition). When looking for your software, keep in mind that it needs to work on Linux.
 
 [1]: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Amdahl%27s_law
 [2]: https://gauss-allianz.de/de/application?organizations%5B0%5D=1200
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