From 8c7fce3eef68217ab0994cf7d772ead80a0e3e97 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: lazariv <taras.lazariv@tu-dresden.de>
Date: Tue, 23 Nov 2021 17:30:59 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Minor text polishing

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 .../software/custom_easy_build_environment.md | 47 +++++++++----------
 1 file changed, 21 insertions(+), 26 deletions(-)

diff --git a/doc.zih.tu-dresden.de/docs/software/custom_easy_build_environment.md b/doc.zih.tu-dresden.de/docs/software/custom_easy_build_environment.md
index 4dbd33a72..e23305c90 100644
--- a/doc.zih.tu-dresden.de/docs/software/custom_easy_build_environment.md
+++ b/doc.zih.tu-dresden.de/docs/software/custom_easy_build_environment.md
@@ -1,16 +1,16 @@
 # EasyBuild
 
-Sometimes the [modules installed in the cluster](modules.md) are not enough for your purposes and
+Sometimes the [modules](modules.md) installed in the cluster are not enough for your purposes and
 you need some other software or a different version of a software.
 
 For most commonly used software, chances are high that there is already a *recipe* that EasyBuild
-provides, which you can use. But what is Easybuild?
+provides, which you can use. But what is EasyBuild?
 
 [EasyBuild](https://easybuilders.github.io/easybuild/) is the software used to build and install
 software on ZIH systems.
 
 The aim of this page is to introduce users to working with EasyBuild and to utilizing it to create
-modules
+modules.
 
 ## Prerequisites
 
@@ -59,9 +59,9 @@ marie@login$ ws_list | grep 'directory.*EasyBuild'
 put commands in a batch file and source it. The latter is recommended for non-interactive jobs,
 using the command `sbatch` instead of `srun`. For the sake of illustration, we use an
 interactive job as an example. Depending on the partitions that you want the module to be usable on
-later, you need to select nodes with the same archtitecture. Thus, use nodes from partition ml
-later, if you want to use the module on nodes of that partition. In this example, we assume that we
-want to use the module on nodes with x86 architecture und thus, use Haswell nodes.
+later, you need to select nodes with the same architecture. Thus, use nodes from partition ml for
+building, if you want to use the module on nodes of that partition. In this example, we assume
+that we want to use the module on nodes with x86 architecture und thus, Haswell nodes will be used.
 
 ```console
 marie@login$ srun --partition=haswell --nodes=1 --cpus-per-task=4 --time=08:00:00 --pty /bin/bash -l
@@ -71,20 +71,15 @@ marie@login$ srun --partition=haswell --nodes=1 --cpus-per-task=4 --time=08:00:0
 
     Using EasyBuild on the login nodes is not allowed.
 
-**Step 3:** Load EasyBuild module.
+**Step 3:** Specify the workspace. The rest of the guide is based on it. Please create an
+environment variable called `WORKSPACE` with the path to your workspace:
 
 ```console
-module load EasyBuild
+marie@compute$ export WORKSPACE=/scratch/ws/1/marie-EasyBuild    #see output of ws_list above
 ```
 
-**Step 4:** Specify the workspace. The rest of the guide is based on it. Please create an
-environment variable called `WORKSPACE` with the location of your workspace:
-
-```console
-marie@compute$ WORKSPACE=/scratch/ws/1/marie-EasyBuild #see output of ws_list above
-```
-
-**Step 5:** Load the correct modenv according to your current or target architecture:
+**Step 4:** Load the correct module environment  `modenv` according to your current or target
+architecture:
 
 === "x86 (default, e. g. partition haswell)"
     ```console
@@ -92,16 +87,16 @@ marie@compute$ WORKSPACE=/scratch/ws/1/marie-EasyBuild #see output of ws_list ab
     ```
 === "Power9 (partition ml)"
     ```console
-    marie@compute$ module load modenv/ml
+    marie@ml$ module load modenv/ml
     ```
 
-**Step 6:** Load module `EasyBuild`
+**Step 5:** Load module `EasyBuild`
 
 ```console
 marie@compute$ module load EasyBuild
 ```
 
-**Step 7:** Set up your environment:
+**Step 6:** Set up your environment:
 
 ```console
 marie@compute$ export EASYBUILD_ALLOW_LOADED_MODULES=EasyBuild,modenv/scs5
@@ -114,13 +109,13 @@ marie@compute$ module use "${EASYBUILD_INSTALLPATH_MODULES}/all"
 marie@compute$ export LMOD_IGNORE_CACHE=1
 ```
 
-**Step 8:** Now search for an existing EasyConfig:
+**Step 7:** Now search for an existing EasyConfig:
 
 ```console
 marie@compute$ eb --search TensorFlow
 ```
 
-**Step 9:** Build the EasyConfig and its dependencies
+**Step 8:** Build the EasyConfig and its dependencies (option `-r`)
 
 ```console
 marie@compute$ eb TensorFlow-1.8.0-fosscuda-2018a-Python-3.6.4.eb -r
@@ -128,14 +123,14 @@ marie@compute$ eb TensorFlow-1.8.0-fosscuda-2018a-Python-3.6.4.eb -r
 
 This may take a long time. After this is done, you can load it just like any other module.
 
-**Step 10:** To use your custom build modules you only need to rerun steps 4, 5, 6, 7 and execute
+**Step 9:** To use your custom build modules you only need to rerun steps 3, 4, 5, 6 and execute
 the usual:
 
 ```console
-marie@compute$ module load TensorFlow-1.8.0-fosscuda-2018a-Python-3.6.4  #replace with name of your module
+marie@compute$ module load TensorFlow-1.8.0-fosscuda-2018a-Python-3.6.4  #replace with the name of your module
 ```
 
-The key is the `module use` command which brings your modules into scope so `module load` can find
+The key is the `module use` command, which brings your modules into scope, so `module load` can find
 them. The `LMOD_IGNORE_CACHE` line makes `LMod` pick up the custom modules instead of searching the
 system cache.
 
@@ -150,8 +145,8 @@ It might also be helpful to inspect the build environment EasyBuild uses. For th
 marie@compute$ eb myEC.eb --dump-env-script`
 ```
 
-This command creates a sourceable .env file with `module load` and `export` commands that show what
-EB does before running, e.g., the configure step.
+This command creates a sourceable `.env`-file with `module load` and `export` commands that show
+what EasyBuild does before running, e.g., the configuration step.
 
 It might also be helpful to use
 
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