From 708dbaf0a04485b083fdc9fd3e35d65c9335f7b2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Martin Schroschk <martin.schroschk@tu-dresden.de>
Date: Thu, 9 May 2024 20:11:21 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] Review wording
---
.../docs/jobs_and_resources/alpha_centauri.md | 10 +++++-----
1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
diff --git a/doc.zih.tu-dresden.de/docs/jobs_and_resources/alpha_centauri.md b/doc.zih.tu-dresden.de/docs/jobs_and_resources/alpha_centauri.md
index e74a67eef..cec4a1dcd 100644
--- a/doc.zih.tu-dresden.de/docs/jobs_and_resources/alpha_centauri.md
+++ b/doc.zih.tu-dresden.de/docs/jobs_and_resources/alpha_centauri.md
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ of the new cluster [`Barnard`](barnard.md).
!!! hint "Maintenance Work"
- On **June 4+5**, we will shut down and migrate `Alpha Centauri` to the Barnard Infiniband
+ On **June 4+5**, we will shut down and migrate `Alpha Centauri` to the Barnard InfiniBand
infrastructure.
As consequences,
@@ -32,21 +32,21 @@ For your convenience, we already have started migrating your data from `/beegfs`
!!! hint "User Action Required"
- The less we have to synchronize the faster the overall process. So clean-up
+ The less we have to synchronize the faster will be the overall process. So, please clean-up
as much as possible as soon as possible.
Important for your work is:
* Do not add terabytes of data to `/beegfs` if you cannot "consume" it before June 4.
-* After final successful data transfer to `/data/horse/beegfs` you then have to
- move it to normal workspaces on `/data/horse`.
+* After the final successful data transfer to `/data/horse/beegfs`, you then have to
+ move it to the normal workspaces on `/data/horse`.
* Be prepared to adapt your workflows to the new paths.
What happens afterward:
* complete deletion of all user data in `/beegfs`
* complete recabling of the storage nodes (BeeGFS hardware)
- * Software+Firmware updates
+ * software and firmware updates
* set-up of a new WEKA filesystem for high I/O demands on the same hardware
In case of any question regarding this maintenance or required action, please do not hesitate to
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