From 69537b8ecd81907276c5d9f6ac080c7c5266abcf Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Martin Schroschk <martin.schroschk@tu-dresden.de>
Date: Mon, 7 Oct 2024 13:38:53 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] Improve wording by using direct speech

- Address reader/user
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 doc.zih.tu-dresden.de/docs/data_lifecycle/overview.md | 10 +++++-----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/doc.zih.tu-dresden.de/docs/data_lifecycle/overview.md b/doc.zih.tu-dresden.de/docs/data_lifecycle/overview.md
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--- a/doc.zih.tu-dresden.de/docs/data_lifecycle/overview.md
+++ b/doc.zih.tu-dresden.de/docs/data_lifecycle/overview.md
@@ -18,11 +18,11 @@ In the following, a brief overview on relevant topics w.r.t. data life cycle man
 The main concept of working with data on ZIH systems bases on [Workspaces](workspaces.md). Use it
 properly:
 
-* use a `/home` directory for the limited amount of personal data, simple examples and the results
-  of calculations. The home directory is not a working directory! However, `/home` filesystem is
-  [backed up](#backup);
-* use `workspaces` as a place for working data (i.e. data sets); Recommendations of choosing the
-  correct storage system for workspace is presented below.
+* use your personal `/home` directory for the limited amount of personal data, simple examples and
+  the results of calculations. Your `home` directory is not a working directory! However, `/home`
+  filesystem is [backed up](#backup);
+* use `workspaces` as a place for your working data (i.e. data sets). Recommendations of choosing
+  the correct filesystem for your workspaces is presented in the following subsection.
 
 ### Taxonomy of Filesystems
 
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