From 2ca877a157966b197d59c44a8c7743a4272b2ab7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Martin Schroschk <martin.schroschk@tu-dresden.de>
Date: Fri, 14 Apr 2023 08:05:11 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] Rephrase

- Make it HPC systems and services, since the services are as important
  as the "metal"
---
 doc.zih.tu-dresden.de/docs/index.md | 18 ++++++++++--------
 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

diff --git a/doc.zih.tu-dresden.de/docs/index.md b/doc.zih.tu-dresden.de/docs/index.md
index cbbeb9f81..c22ef202a 100644
--- a/doc.zih.tu-dresden.de/docs/index.md
+++ b/doc.zih.tu-dresden.de/docs/index.md
@@ -1,26 +1,28 @@
 # ZIH HPC Documentation
 
-This is the documentation of the HPC systems provided at
+This is the documentation of the HPC systems and services provided at
 [TU Dresden/ZIH](https://tu-dresden.de/zih/).
 
-This documentation is work in progress, since we try
+This documentation will be continuously updated, since we try
 to incorporate more information with increasing experience and with every question you ask us.
 
-For more information about how to cite us: [Acknowledgement](https://doc.zih.tu-dresden.de/application/acknowledgement/)
+If the provided HPC systems and services helped to advance your research, please cite us. Why this
+is important and acknowledgment examples can be found in the section
+[Acknowledgement](https://doc.zih.tu-dresden.de/application/acknowledgement/).
 
 ## Contribution
 
-The
-HPC team invites you to take part in the improvement of these pages by correcting or adding useful
-information.
+The HPC team invites you to take part in the improvement of these pages by correcting or adding
+useful information. Your contributions are highly welcome!
 
-Your contributions are highly welcome. The easiest way for you to contribute is to report issues via
+The easiest way for you to contribute is to report issues via
 the GitLab
 [issue tracking system](https://gitlab.hrz.tu-chemnitz.de/zih/hpcsupport/hpc-compendium/-/issues).
 Please check for any already existing issue before submitting your issue in order to avoid duplicate
 issues.
 
-Please also find out the other ways you could contribute in our [guidelines how to contribute](contrib/howto_contribute.md).
+Please also find out the other ways you could contribute in our
+[guidelines how to contribute](contrib/howto_contribute.md).
 
 !!! tip "Reminder"
 
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