From ac4a20577f65d43b0761a89f36eaac7646e33ddc Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Moe Jette <jette1@llnl.gov>
Date: Fri, 4 Apr 2003 19:03:00 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Minor word-smithing.
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@@ -1,9 +1,10 @@
\section{Conclusion and Future Plans}
-We have developed and presented SLURM, a simple, highly scalable, robust, and portable cluster resource
-management system, in this paper.
+We have presented in this paper an overview of SLURM, a simple, highly scalable, robust,
+and portable cluster resource management system.
The contribution of this work is that we have provided a immediately-available
-and inexpensive tool that virtually anybody can use to efficiently manage clusters of different size and architecture.
+and open-source tool that virtually anybody can use to efficiently manage clusters of
+different sizes and architecture.
We expect SLURM to begin production use on LLNL Linux clusters
starting in March 2003 and be available for distribution shortly
thereafter.
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